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Emotion

December 3, 2009
By SoaringToEdensPhantomHome SILVER, Erie, Pennsylvania
SoaringToEdensPhantomHome SILVER, Erie, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always been amazed at the way an ordinary observer lends so much more credence and attaches so much more importance to waking events than to those occurring in dreams... Man... is above all the plaything of his memory." -Andre Breton


Doth feel the emotion,
running deep and dark,
that hath leave its mark.
From that iniquitous potion.
And to whom did thou hark.
The rain hath cease,
For we shall prosper.
And with thou hand we see thy beliefs.
None can cross her.
For that doth can assure.
Thy pain is my pain.
We shall become united,
under the moonlit mane,
can it be lighted.


The author's comments:
This piece was actually not very difficult, it was the topic that I had trouble thinking of.

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on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:45 pm
SoaringToEdensPhantomHome SILVER, Erie, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always been amazed at the way an ordinary observer lends so much more credence and attaches so much more importance to waking events than to those occurring in dreams... Man... is above all the plaything of his memory." -Andre Breton

Thank You. I will do that. =]

Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:11 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.