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The Stag

July 10, 2013
By Teenwriter1322 BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
Teenwriter1322 BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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Glistening like a ball of fire
A beauty to behold and admire
A charismatic creation of Nature
A golden coated creature
Glittering all the way with pride
Sprints like a flash of lightning, so bright

The spirit to soar high, the ardor crystal clear
The hope to survive and live life without fear
A twinkle in the glinting sharp eyes, joy intense
Etches the true symbol of magnificence

Splendid Spots of timber brown
And in the same hue, a majestic crown
Fulfilling its thirst with sparkling streams
Around meadows, emerald green, it beams
Envious, the others are with its luminosity
A portrait of brilliance, in its entirety

An artist Mother Nature is to paint such a being
Mellow strokes of perfection and shades never seen
Serenity and purity is what describes this creation
A gem of marvels created by the divine imagination



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on Jul. 25 2013 at 1:37 am
Teenwriter1322 BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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Hey thank you so much! I am honoured. Well, this was just a try. I'd would love to have your feedback on my short story (realistic fiction section) as well. Take your time! :)

on Jul. 19 2013 at 7:01 pm
jazzwarrior GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
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Weeds are flowers, too, once you get to know them. -A.A. Milne

This is by far the most beautiful poem I have read on TeenInk so far! Your word choice is exquisite and the sparkling imagery you use to describe the stag is wonderful! You've blown my mind.