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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on May. 21 2010 at 11:42 am
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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this is so amazing . it brought me to tears .

 

i still do have my mother but i never thought of it in that way and its just so upseting . im so sorry for your loss :'(


on May. 21 2010 at 9:26 am
float_away SILVER, Pheonix, Arizona
6 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love moderately, long love doth so." ~Shakespeare

I know how you feel but with my dad... i feel for ya :) beautiful writing, it's amazing

on May. 20 2010 at 6:48 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is the Movement&quot; -TWLOHA<br /> &quot;Love is our weapon.&quot; -Christofer Drew<br /> &quot;I&#039;ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!&quot; -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

This is beautiful. I'm sorrry.

on May. 19 2010 at 5:15 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

I've read this so many times. Yet I can't stop reading it. Its so sad but beautiful and meaningful. Its put together really well. I loved it. Im sorry for your loss.

:')


on May. 18 2010 at 11:04 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

You've gotten a lot of comments on this without a doubt, yet I felt compelled to comment anyway. This is the kind of poem that can evoke emotion just by reading it. It was thoughtful and raw, and tied together nicely. <3 I'd appreciate it if you read/commented my work sometime. :)

on May. 17 2010 at 8:33 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
~~Isn&#039;t it funny how the most important things in life aren&#039;t things?~~

beautifully written and full of emotion. I loved it

on May. 13 2010 at 8:16 pm
princessariel SILVER, N/a, Maryland
5 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn&#039;t this great? The salty sea air! The wind blowing in your face! *sigh* Perfect day to be at sea!<br /> -Eric from The Little Mermaid

this was really beautiful. it reminded me of my friend's mom who recently passed away. i love how you evoked this emotion through your words :]

maRAWR GOLD said...
on May. 5 2010 at 2:25 pm
maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;all you need is love&quot; -the beatles =)

passionate and beautiful... very nice.  ive grown up with a single mother who has never been on the same page as me, and its interesting to ponder whether i would have been better off with no mother at all... i havent really found an answer yet, but it was great to hear your side of the story =)

on May. 4 2010 at 10:21 am
marijuanaismyname SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
memento vivere

my mother died a few years back and this poem really means something to me. thank you and you can read mine anytime

1layzie8 said...
on May. 3 2010 at 3:36 pm
this poem is so sad. but also so realistis. evey word creates a vivid image in my mind..

on May. 1 2010 at 10:43 am
Nervoussfacee BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Love is giving someone your heart and trusting them not to break it.

your writing is amazing! <3

on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:10 pm
PoetryKaiee BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you because I need you .... ( No ) ; I need you because I love you !&quot;

This is really beautiful . 

Im sorry for your lost , keep writting your an amazing poet ( = 

            xoxox , Kaiee


on Apr. 30 2010 at 2:31 pm
omg , i read this and cryed in school , one of my moms friend died a couple days agoo , this is soo goood .

on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:08 pm
foolslikeme GOLD, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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This is touching. Amazing piece that reminds me of myself. Well done.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 9:07 pm
Chicklet0903 GOLD, Watertown, Wisconsin
11 articles 21 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The funny thing about sacrifice is that sometimes, when you think you&#039;re losing something, you&#039;re actually just passing it on to someone else.&quot;

This is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. Truly inspiring.

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on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:23 pm
Kara_333, Peabody, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Lookin like a fool with ur pants on the ground

this is so beautiful. i cant imagine life without my mother. im so sorry for your loss.  i cried after reading this. you really have a gift with putting your feelings down on paper.

on Apr. 29 2010 at 8:00 pm
AinsleyChernek SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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This touched me deep down.  Thank you for sharing.  

lilybb BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 7:32 pm
lilybb BRONZE, Nyack, New York
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this is really impressive.. i'm sorry for your loss

on Apr. 29 2010 at 6:37 pm
tearingheart SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life&#039;s not about waiting for the storm to pass, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

you're very talented

on Apr. 29 2010 at 6:32 pm
revolutionary BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The fiend in his own shape is less hideous than when he rages in the breast of man&quot; - John Hawthorne

wow, definately keep writing