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Vampire Nocturne

May 12, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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The blue light of the stars,
the caress of the wind,
The sounds of the night,
The touch on my skin.
The moon in the sky,
waning till then,
I’ll kiss you goodbye,
For the sun’s up again.
I’ll miss you tonight,
An eternity spent,
The time though slight,
feels all but bent.
I’ll bite on the way,
Blood on my lips,
Coffin sleep slowly,
down in the crypts.

© Brandi H., Huber Heights, OH

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This article has 16 comments.

Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 1 2014 at 7:16 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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thanks a bunch @kyline! P.S. Could I use your name in a story? Its really cool!
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2014 at 7:13 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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I loved how you worded it.
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 27 2014 at 5:13 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank You! =)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 26 2014 at 11:45 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you! CX
..L.. said...
on May. 26 2014 at 11:38 am
..L.., Wentzville, Missouri
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I like how smooth your wording is. It really portays your unique thought process. Way to go! :P
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 25 2014 at 8:59 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank you! CX
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
on May. 25 2014 at 8:57 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, &quot;Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping.&quot; - Fred Rogers

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The rhyme's nice. I don't think that vampire love stories are anything new, but oh well. The imagery is good. I like it. 4/5
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 25 2014 at 6:57 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank You!  XD
true-lee GOLD said...
on May. 25 2014 at 12:10 pm
true-lee GOLD, Ridgefield, Connecticut
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Hey! I liked your rhymes; they didn't seem too contrived, and flowed smoothly. That's actually really hard to do, and you did it very well.
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 25 2014 at 10:57 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank U! XD
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 25 2014 at 10:57 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank You! XD  
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on May. 25 2014 at 10:43 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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nicely done the rythm is smooth and it flows really well
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2014 at 10:41 am
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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&quot;Our passion is our strength.&quot; <br /> -Billie Joe Armstrong

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Lovely writing. You're quite the artist.(:
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 24 2014 at 9:29 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank You. :) I apprecciate your feedback! XD
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on May. 22 2014 at 7:13 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

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Wow, this is amazing! The fluency of your poem makes it really captivating to read.