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Just to Let You Know MAG
Your butchering words
In the beginning
Went through my head
As a child who listens
To every word you say
Your constant sarcasm
Your words which
I thought were the truth
The never giving up
Just to let you know, Dad
Those butchering words
To me are now worthless
For I know now
It was only your sickness
© Anonymous
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 6:36 am
great job-love it!!! please check out some of my work!!!
BrittNicole BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2010 at 10:09 am
I completely know how you feel.
Its.beautiful. BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2010 at 1:01 pm
Punctuation, anyone?
“wow this was very nice it made my day thank you”
“that was a great poem i love u”
“your a great writer”
“i have a abuse family too”
“This is a very disturbing peom it really makes me sit here and think. But after i kept reading your work i realized that it is very well writed when it comes to diction, syntax, and structure. Your use of repetition”
The high standards set by Teen Ink is obviously well established by the thorough checking of grammar, spelling and post quality.
i totily can relat 2 dis "peom" abusivity is a fo real problum in sosyity and places otherwhere in da wurld. werd. Aww .. Sum
8) <3 : ) less than 3 XD =^.^=
“wow this was very nice it made my day thank you”
“that was a great poem i love u”
“your a great writer”
“i have a abuse family too”
“This is a very disturbing peom it really makes me sit here and think. But after i kept reading your work i realized that it is very well writed when it comes to diction, syntax, and structure. Your use of repetition”
The high standards set by Teen Ink is obviously well established by the thorough checking of grammar, spelling and post quality.
i totily can relat 2 dis "peom" abusivity is a fo real problum in sosyity and places otherwhere in da wurld. werd. Aww .. Sum
8) <3 : ) less than 3 XD =^.^=
Iamnotinenglish31 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:22 pm
Thanks
pasquale_f said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:17 pm
wow this was very nice it made my day thank you
manuslice said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:16 pm
that was a great poem i love u
xXRiaLoraineXx GOLD said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:13 pm
this is amazing, and I can totally relate... Keep it up!
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2010 at 10:10 am
This is so .. WOW.
i mean i totally feel for you because i have a abuse family too .
im so sorry for you . i feel for you all the way <3 .
flightlessbird PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:42 am
thankyou. i have been dealing with an abusive father my whole life. if it wasnt a fist, it was a word. you express a feeling that only girls like me can fully comprehend. thankyou girl, thankyou so much.
Lucious super taco said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:32 am
no its not whahahahahahahahahaha
stop screamiing at me NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Lucious super taco said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:30 am
yes it does happen a lot every day for me dont you ever lie to my face again
Lucious555 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:22 am
Yes sir it does u kno it
taco444 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:21 am
This poem is the best
Johnnymac229 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 6:01 am
really shows that you know your stuff
Johnnymac229 said...
on May. 24 2010 at 5:59 am
This is a very disturbing peom it really makes me sit here and think. But after i kept reading your work i realized that it is very well writed when it comes to diction, syntax, and structure. Your use of repitition
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