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High Aim

December 29, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

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Like hawk, I want to fly,
And conquer the limitless sky,
It's no problem to aim high,
Let me give it a try!

© Jacob W., Oklahoma City, OK

The author's comments:
It suddenly came to my mind while I was writing an essay on "My Aim in Life" in my Creative Writing class.
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Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 12:41 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.<br /> - Zoya Khan

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Nice :) :) :)
Silenced-Insanity SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 12:17 pm
Silenced-Insanity SILVER, Moore, Oklahoma
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When you acknowledge there is nothing repulsive or unforgivable or shameful about yourself, it becomes easier the be that authentic person and feel like you&#039;re living a less performed life. <br /> -John Green

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Short, but good (;
Padfoot507 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 2:30 am
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
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&ldquo;It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.&rdquo;<br /> -Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> &quot;I&#039;m just a little bit caught in the middle,<br /> Life is a maze, and love is a ridde.&quot;<br /> -Lenka

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As Songbird said, simple and short, but it gets a clear message across about your aspirations. Well done! But again, aim for more complex rhymes, or ones that aren't so commonly done. Good work! :)
SongBird04 said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:31 am
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Short and simple but I love it! :)