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See me tomorrow if we have it enough to pain it away MAG

July 22, 2008
By Anonymous

I see me and you
But land-locked hotel rooms
No doors in rooms that never lead to another
Driven there with choices made so wrong
What hell we have found!
Dream of the night forever!
Curse and terror
That my dreams of finding home
Can only cease in all our passion!

Equivalent exchange,
My heart for yours!
Something that can’t be done
Because you’re more than I could ever dream to be!

What life took can never be fair to us!
But it’s all the same for what they have forfeited,
Just not to us

Dead dreams
October screams
For once and for all!
We all land safely
Only to drop to our demise!
That’s how they get us
Signing up for a war in my mind
My heart has been left behind

Equivalent exchange,
My heart for yours!
Something that can’t be done
Because you’re more than I could ever dream to be!
Curse and terror
That my dreams of finding home
Can only cease in all our passion!
What hell we have found!
Dream of the night forever!

Equivalent exchange,
My heart for yours!
It’s just something that can’t be done!

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
this is part of hope. the decision i have made to recognize the truth of who i am. the way that my family would try to destroy who i am inside...... if at all to notice the person i am is not who they want me to be so they have convinced themselves that i don't even know who i am.
welcome to to this hell that i have come to call my life. in short speak swiftly to encourage the person next to you to dream hard and understand who they are... my reader live and be who you were born to be!

http://www.myspace.com/fallingthrough89
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laurensoccer SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 9:49 pm
laurensoccer SILVER, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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I really loved how you open up in the poem and unveil the real you. Thank you!!!!
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:53 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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both of them! :D
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:25 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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you mean my poem the cottage or the poem see me tomorrow if.........?
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:21 pm
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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This was a really good poem.
artmantist BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:30 pm
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hello, nice poem. Would u guys wanna check out my work. its called the cottage 

thank u

WynterPage95 ELITE said...
on May. 31 2011 at 5:41 pm
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I second that!!!
nebraska98 said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:44 am
this was a really good poem that i really enjoyed
goodjobbob said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:43 am
This poem is AMAZING! I love your teerific use of imagery! I read it about 1000 times and i never got sick of it! <3
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check out my poems! please!
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on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:12 pm
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When it comes to who i am ad finding home i am stuck because i am told who to be instead of being who i want to be............i love how i can relate to this poem in such a way. i love this..... tagged =D
JustBeingME SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:22 pm
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Tagged as favorite! This is great stuff. I know how you feel... I can totally relate. Love the way the words just flow so well... Nice job man :)
Lainee said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 9:20 pm
Hey Austen, Man you have talent. Don't let anyone try to change you, or tell you you're clueless about yourself. Be who YOU are. Hang in there, it'll get better.
falling4him17 said...
on Jun. 11 2009 at 7:21 pm
i love it.And everybody always has the power to do wat they want with their live.

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JasmineG. GOLD said...
on May. 31 2009 at 10:08 pm
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Wow.. you are a really good writer =]. If your life is such a hell, change it. Everyone has the power to do so. So why not you?

~Jasmine :)