All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
i hate and i like
September 17, 2009
i like how you say sweet things
i hate how its never enough
i like how you always talk to me
i hate you never have enough time
i like how you care about others
i hate how you defend your exgirl friend even after all of what she did ....
© Paula B., Katy, TX
Similar Articles
Previous Next
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 3 comments.
. said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 3:45 pm
good poem! your name wouldnt happen to be helena would it?
Short and sweet!
I really felt the impact of what you were saying. So nice job. I have a few suggestions; the first four lines, they kind of mirror the other--it's a little repetitive, but I see how that's difficult to adjust. Because "sweet things" and simple talking are of course different. I really liked the last two lines, I thought they were pretty strong. =)
I really felt the impact of what you were saying. So nice job. I have a few suggestions; the first four lines, they kind of mirror the other--it's a little repetitive, but I see how that's difficult to adjust. Because "sweet things" and simple talking are of course different. I really liked the last two lines, I thought they were pretty strong. =)
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 8:51 pm
i've been through that situation. its tough. i like the poem. keep on writing
