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April 26, 2009
By Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

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I look to the east and see the sun,
A shimmering ball of fire.
Marking that the night is done,
As the sun floats ever higher.

All my problems seem to disappear,
With the darkness which is fading.
It's a fresh new start as opportunities appear,
Sunrise marks a new day in the making.

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Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:38 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

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It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

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Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:38 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

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Thank you. This is also one of my favorites.
Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:37 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

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Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 5:27 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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love this too!!!!!!!!!:) u got good writing skillz
Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:35 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

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It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

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In what way would you say better word choice? Do you mean more sophisticated? Or does it just not flow right to you? Please elaborate so I can improve my writing. 
biggerinfinities SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:59 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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&ldquo;We accept the love we think we deserve.&rdquo; <br /> ― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

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i like it and it has a nice feeling, bt maybe you could se even better word choice?
Malory_Sturling BRONZE said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 9:31 pm
Malory_Sturling BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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&quot;Good writing can make you look at something unbelievable and doubt yourself by believing that it is real.&quot; &hearts;<br /> <br /> &quot;You can get a thousand compliments, but one failure can tear you down; don&#039;t let it.&quot;<br /> ~Malory Sturling &hearts;

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another amazing poem! WOW! i LOVE this one! =D
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2009 at 5:30 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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Great job, Karen!! I love this poem, it's very beautiful. Keep it up!!